In the circa of the simian 1980 AD, the ninth year of the duodecennial cycle of the Chinese zodiac calendar, under the auspicious sign of metal of the five elemental symbols, an old and weary traveller found his final resting place on the banks of the nearly frozen Gurudongmar Lake at an altitude of 17,800 feet in the mighty Himalayas in the Mangan District of the Indian state of Sikkim. The etched crevices of his wrinkled epidermis stood a testament to a lifetime of journeying through the wilderness in some of the world’s highest, remotest, and harshest regions.
After many uncountable years of breathing the air, drinking the water, and consuming the food offered by mother earth, his mind had finally started to give in. He questioned the very meaning of his existence as only fragments of memories remained with him. A warrior, a lover, a poet, a philosopher, a hunter, a craftsman, a musician, he had perhaps been all, but now he could not remember. Flickering traits and sporadic muscle memories occasionally indicated what or who he might have been. Whatever he was, it was clear that he was a wandering being.
The wooden almirah he carried on his arched back containing bits and pieces of his life was more of an abysmal puzzle than a box of answers to him. Sitting beside an open fire under the dazzling night sky, he caressed an old Mongolian recurve bow. Though he knew that the weapon had a bamboo core, Saiga antelope horn belly, sinew back, bound together with animal glue, and wrapped in birch bark, he had no memories with it.
A single birchwood arrow with rare eagle-feather fletching tipped with a wide-metal-blade arrowhead in his shrivelling quiver was highly unusual for a hunter to carry. One never used such an arrow for hunting. It was simply not practical. Hunting arrows usually had crane-feather fletching with bone or wooden points. His metal arrowhead, however, had a hollow channel very similar to a whistling arrow, which hunters used to freeze their games with the sound they caused while piercing through the wind. This arrow was custom-built for something specific. What did he shoot with it? A scroll of parchment written by him in a script he no longer remembered or could read perhaps had all the answers he sought, but then he could not decipher it.
At night he dreamt about religion. Was he religious? At least he could not remember to be but spiritual he could have been, as he felt a strong connection with everything. Somewhere deep in his ebbing mind, he knew that religion was something that helped people find the meaning of things. Perhaps religion could help him decipher the meaning of his existence, but alas, only if he could remember who and what he had been. Somehow, he knew that the lake was also called the ‘Jewel of Sikkim’ and was considered sacred by the Sikhs, Hindus, and Buddhists.
Opening his eyes to the maiden rays of the next day’s dawning sun kissing the snowcapped mountains surrounding the magical lake, he wondered from which direction he had come. Did he come from the south of the Tibetan (Chinese) border, just five kilometres from where he was, but it was impossible to cross the mighty Himalayas from that side?
Then had he come from the town of Lachen via Thangu Valley in Sikkim. The route passed through the rugged terrain of a moraine, an accumulation of unconsolidated debris of regolith and rock, an ancient glacial till, with high alpine pastures covered with different species of Rhododendron trees. It was the only route that pilgrims usually took to visit the lake.
He wondered how he could remember such unnecessary things and not even recollect from which direction he had come. While nascent memories vanished fast, old recollections floated in his mind like the unbound pages of some ancient manuscript. Further, he could not differentiate which memory was a reality and which was a dream.
He remembered the folklore that Guru Padmasambhava, also known as Guru Rinpoche, founder of Tibetan Buddhism, who visited the area in the 8th century, blessed a particular spot on the lake never to freeze so that it could provide year-round drinking water to the isolated mountain tribes. Funny that he felt that he was there when the guru performed the miracle, but how could that be; it must have been hundreds of years ago.
Then he remembered another story about Guru Nanak Sahib, founder of the Sikh religion, dipping his walking stick in the frozen lake to create the unfrozen spot at the request of local shepherds sometime in the 15th century. He felt he was there too. Did both of the events occur? Or was only one of the stories true? Which story was true, which false, did not matter to him? It was a blessing enough that that thawed hole provided year-round water for drinking, and now he could spend the remainder of his days here, where there was hardly anyone to question and enquire about his being.
As time passed, he lost track of the days and times. He could no longer remember when he had come to the lake and how long he had been there. Not being able to recollect what or who one had been was perhaps the cruellest thing to experience in the December days of life. After all, what are we without our memories? Are we even alive? He often wondered while strolling beside the pristine lake in this magical land of the divine.
“Wake up, old man, wake up,” screamed a little shepherd girl and woke him from sleep. “Can you help me retrieve my little lamb; it has wandered onto the ice,” pleaded the child as the old timer rubbed his eyes with his palms to get a bearing of what was happening. Cautiously walking on the thin frozen sheet, the ancient traveller slowly approached the lamb, clapped his hands, and made some noise to steer the helpless animal away from danger. Ignoring the dancing man on the ice as if he was not there, the lamb trotted towards safety, and a beautiful friendship started between an old and fading brain and a young and discovering mind.
The little girl started coming to Gurudongmar with her small band of sheep every day. Her parents always remained at a distance and left the oldtimer alone. They preferred not to disturb the hermit who lived in the yak-skin tent. They somehow did not mind their daughter pestering the quiet human being. It seemed like the family were nomadic shepherds who had landed in the region and had camped in the alpine pastures in Thangu Valley, a few kilometres from the lake.
The girl would speak for hours with him. Her young and sharp mind would pose millions of questions, many of which the ancient man could not answer. She would go through the contents of his almirah, try to read his precious scroll, and even play with the Mongolian recurve bow and the single birchwood arrow. As time passed, interacting with the girl, the traveller realised that he perhaps need not seek answers to his being. Religion, which tried to put meaning to everything, seemed unnecessary. He realised that life was to be experienced, one fleeting moment at a time. It was unimportant to hold onto things, but it was crucial to live the moment as fruitfully and helpfully as possible. The little girl was there for him during his last days on earth, and it was a moment of blessing to experience.
“Wake up, old man, wake up,” screamed the little shepherd girl waking up the oldtimer from sleep. “Bandits have raided our camp. They have beaten and tied up my father and are hurting my mother. Save my parents, save my parents,” cried the poor soul.
Picking his withered recurve bow and the single birchwood, wide-metal-tipped, eagle-feather fletching arrow, the forgotten man ran with the little girl towards her camp to save her parents.
They came and stopped beside a small Rhododendron niveum tree on top of a little hill. He saw that two men had pinned down the little girl’s mother onto a bed of straw while another stood on top to violate her. A fourth man skewed a skinned lamb on an open fire, preparing a feast to celebrate their pillage of the innocents.
At that instance, a sudden ocean of memory flooded the ancient man’s mind. He remembered who he had been and what he was capable of doing. Placing the birchwood arrow on the old bow, he drew it with every ounce of his remaining strength. Calculating the distance to be more than five hundred meters, factoring wind, speed, and several other little things within a fraction of a second, he released the arrow with all his might.
The projective tore through the wind with a shrill cry, and the bandits looked up towards the sky. They saw a single dazzling arrow with its metal tip reflecting the golden rays of the sun, appearing to be on fire, descending from the heaven above. Before they could react, the deadly projectile went through the chest of the bandit in the middle and lodged into a tree trunk behind.
Spontaneously the bandit put his hands on his chest to cover his wound but did not feel any pain. When he removed his hands from where the arrow had passed his body, there was no blood or gash, as if nothing had happened. The bandits looked at the arrow lodged into the tree behind them. They were too scared to think about what had happened. Lucky to be alive, they ran, mounted their horses, and galloped away.
The little girl’s mother quickly rose and untied her husband. Both of them went to the tree trunk, and when the girl’s father tried to touch the arrow lodged in the wood, it dissolved into a fog of mist. They turned and looked up towards the direction from where it was fired, and there on top of the hill above their camp, they saw the silhouette of their little girl and the old man.
Early in the morning the next day, the shepherd couple came and stood outside the yak-skin tent to pay their respect to the guardian of the lake, who had saved them. Inside the tent flopped the creaking pane of a wooden almirah, and inside it lay a scroll of parchment with the title “Memoirs of Sky Fire, the greatest archer in service of the Mighty Khan – circa of the simian 1200 AD.” On the floor beside a human skeleton lay a Mongolian recurve bow and the eagle-feather fletching birchwood arrow with the wide-metal arrowhead.
After that, the couple walked to a small heap of stones placed in a circle amidst a little grove in the valley. There they laid a bouquet of wildflowers on the grave of their twelve-year-old daughter, who had drowned and died in the lake trying to save a little lamb many years back.
Copyright © 2022 TRISHIKH DASGUPTA
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Thanks for a window into cultural history.
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My pleasure cigarman. Stories are indeed a great window to different cultures.
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Beautiful stories. I always enjoy reading them. It’s amazing where you get your inspiration from.
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Thank you so much. I treasure your appreciation. I draw inspiration from everything around me, my life experiences, just like anyone else. I, however, strongly believe that one can write a story on absolutely anything. So keeping this in mind, I have never abandoned a story in mid-way and somehow have always managed to complete by the grace of God, and through the best wishes and support from friends like you.
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Starting from the Title to the End ,it was all treat of words.
Great Writing 🙌🌟
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So happy that you like my story. Nothing gives me more joy, than when someone enjoys one of my stories. Always treasure your appreciation.
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Amazing story.
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Thank you so much. Appreciation always gives me great encouragement.
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Lengthy, detailed and absorbing story,Trishhikh . I enjoyed from beginning to end. Thank you.
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You are most welcome Anita. So happy that you found the story absorbing. Appreciation really makes my day.
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Bonjour ce n’est qu’un petit passage
Parfois on oublie de remercier les personnes qui rendent notre vie meilleure et plus heureuse.
Parfois on oublie de leur dire qu’ils sont une partie importante dans notre vie.
Aujourd’hui est un autre jour et je te remercie pour tout cela
bise Amitié BERNARD
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Thank you Bernard, much appreciate your heartfelt love and kindness
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Keep producing great work
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Thank you so much. Your appreciation gives me much encouragement.
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Thank you so much for promoting my story in your blog. Now so many more people will be able to read it. Really appreciate your supportive gesture.
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This is lovely!
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Thank you so much.
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You’re welcome.
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What’s an almirah?
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An almirah is another name for a cupboard. In this case a sort of vertical wooden box, like the kinds carried by Chinese travellers of the past on their backs.
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Thank you. Learnt something new. I was not aware that Chinese travellers of the past carried cupboards on their backs. Maybe I am thinking of the American cupboard. In the past it would have taken a horse to carry it.
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Am so glad to have been able to share this with you. I am sure the Almirah’s carried by Chinese travellers of the ancient times such as Hiuen Tsang must have been quite compact and very different from a traditional cupboard. I think it must have been more like a vertical trunk.
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Now that I know about them I think so too. Must had been something they could carry on their shoulders.
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Yes, those men were made to some rare metal.
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I agree. They had backs we do not possess today. Most people today would be lying on the ground in pain shall such a weight was placed on their back.
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There is no doubt that the people of the past were tougher than us.
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Yes, a lot tougher. : )
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A nice case for being reincarnated spread goodness in one’s next life I’ve read.
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Thank you Usfman for liking the story. Your comments always cheer me up.
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You are an amazing writer! Brilliant. God bless you greatly in all things.
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Thank you so much Stephanie. Appreciation always works wonders for my writing engine. So glad that you like my stories and writing skills.
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Your intelligence soars with the whistle of the arrow. Thank you for visiting my morning wake up to quiver my wings.
Quicksilver
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Wow, what a beautiful connotation. Treasure your creative comment. So glad that you liked my story.
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Thank you so much for promoting my story in your blog. It always a pleasure to share my story to a larger audience.
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Bonjour L’AMI
Le jour vient de se lever c ‘est l’heure du petit déjeuner
L’occasion pour moi de te rappeler notre amitié
Je voulais mettre un peu de sucre dans ton café
En te souhaitant une bonne journée
Le soir après ce petit écris pour toi
Me rends heureux en pensant que tu es pu le lire
Tu es un ami ou une amie merveilleuse
Je te destine un petit bisou
Ton ami BERNARD
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Thanks Bernard. Have a great day.
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BUONA SERATA
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I saw your message the next tday. So good morning from India.
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IL CONTINENTE MISTERIOSO
GRAZIE
THE MYSTERIOUS CONTINENT
THANK YOU
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You are most welcome.
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GRAZIE GENTILISSIMO. 🙂
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You are most welcome.
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🙂 GRAZIE
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Ohhh.
Unexpected ending. Love it ❤️
I want a rare eagle fletching for my bow! (I enjoy archery 🏹)
Wonderful evocative tale.
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Thank you so much Lesley for liking the story. So glad that you liked the unexpected ending. I love archery too, but have never got the chance to practice seriously, hopefully one day would be able to tick this off my bucket list.
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I’m now looking for a rare eagle feather 🪶😁
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I am sure, that you will get the feather Lesley. I am just glad that my story raised the interest.
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💗
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Bonjour mon AMI
Avec espoir ce week-end dernier en as-tu bien profité. Moi, à peu près
C’est avec sourire que je viens auprès des tiens et toi mème t’apporter du bonheur au sein de ta demeure
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Je te souhaite tout le bonheur du monde
Bonne et agréable journée, bon mois d’octobre
bise amicale Bernard
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Thank you Bernard. My best wishes to you as well.
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Great Story! Ecellent. I was right there with the old hunter!
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Thank you so much. So glad that you got engrossed in the story.
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Your blog work is very interesting to read. I appreciate your continuing to read my posts.
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Thank you too for your continued likes and comments. I really appreciate it. It is my pleasure to visit your blog as well.
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You are very welcome, and are very talented in all that you do
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You are too kind with your appreciation and that power of appreciation is your Talent and gift from God. I cherish every bit of it.
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your talents and your kind words.
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It is my pleasure.
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Thank you. You are so very, very kind.
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What a beautiful tale, Trishikh! Loved the surprise ending 🙂
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My pleasure Rosaliene. So happy that you liked this little tale of mine and specially the surprise ending. I always believe that a surprise ending is a good way to cement a great story.
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Great blog
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Thank you so much Rajani. I treasure your appreciation.
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This is an amazing story..very interesting.
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Thank you so much. Nothing makes my day better than a little bit of appreciation.
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Hello Trishikh !
Thank you for sharing this interesting and engaging story. As always you have kept the interest of the readers till the end, with a suitable ending as well.
Somehow, I am not getting notifications of your latest posts. I have followed you since the time I joined WordPress, but each time I check, it shows otherwise. Anyway, doing it again.
My best wishes to you. Keep doing great work. 👍
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Dear Chitrangada, first of all I must thank you for this lovely and heartfelt comment. I always treasure your words of appreciation. They do give me great joy.
I think you have not received any notification of my stories as I have not published one in the past one and a half months. This has been the longest break that I have ever taken from writing.
The good news, however, is that I have nearly completed my latest story and will release it tomorrow. So you would be able to read my latest story tomorrow.
Have a great day dear friend. 🙏
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Good story.
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Thank you so much for liking it. Appreciation is the greatest reward that I crave.
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Another wonderful story in which we have no idea where we are being led!
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Dear Janet, so glad that you liked the unexpected flow of the story. Comments and appreciation such as this really makes writing these stories worthwhile.
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Enlightening. Thanks.
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You are most welcome. So glad that you liked the story. Believe me, nothing gives me more joy than a little bit of appreciation.
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Thank you for sharing. I love it. Your writing s are stunningly beautiful 🥰
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Thank you so much for your appreciative comment. I really treasure it.
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It’s my pleasure. Hope to see more of your content.
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The pleasure is equally mine. I have been unable to concentrate on writing for a while, but am sure that you would soon see more of my new stories. In the meanwhile do visit my blog and read more of my stories. There are many good tales there, some of them I am sure you would love to read.
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Season’s Greetings & and a Blessed 2023.
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Thank you so much. Season’s Greetings to you and your family too. A happy and prosperous 2023 as well.
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UN SALUTO
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Thank you so much.
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A TE
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Wonderful 😊
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It really makes my day when someone likes one of my stories. Thank you dear friend for appreciating.
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What a captivating and poignant tale of the old traveler and the mystical Gurudongmar Lake! The narrative beautifully intertwines elements of spirituality, history, and folklore, taking us on a journey through the depths of human existence and memory. The wanderer’s life, marked by a myriad of experiences but plagued by the fog of forgotten identities, resonates deeply with the universal quest for meaning and self-discovery.
Your story also masterfully explores the themes of connection and impermanence. The bond between the old man and the little shepherd girl serves as a heartwarming testament to the power of companionship in the face of life’s uncertainties. The girl, vibrant and curious, becomes a beacon of hope and clarity in the traveler’s twilight years, helping him realize that life is not about holding onto the past but about living in the present and making the most of each moment.
The climactic act of bravery, where the old man saves the girl’s family, serves as a powerful catalyst for his self-realization. In that moment of heroism, he rediscovers his identity and purpose, albeit briefly, before the story takes its tragic turn. The revelation of the girl’s fate, having been a memory or spirit all along, adds a haunting yet touching layer to the narrative.
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Dear Michael, reading your comment at the start of the day imbibes in me a great sense of satisfaction. Nothing makes my day better, than when someone appreciates one of my stories.
So glad that you like this little tale of mine. History, geography, mythology, folklore, moral messaging are always a part of my short stories. I am so happy that these elements resonates with you as well. The quest for ‘meaning and self-discovery’ as you have rightly spotted is again an idea which has always intrigued many of us throughout our history.
Yes, we humans are social creatures at the end of it all, how much ever isolation we may seek, company is something which will always bring glee in us, though we may decide not to express it.
Your in-depth and such a thoughtful analysis of my story is really heart touching. Do visit again there are many stories that I have written, most of which I am sure, you would greatly enjoy.
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You can be sure I will return, Trishkh
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It would certainly give me great joy. Have a great day good old friend.
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UN PENSIERO
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Thank you.
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😉
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