The ink refused to behave. It spread where it was not invited, turning the paper faintly bruised, as if even words were learning the city’s new habits. Ghalib lifted the pen, shook it once, and set it down again. Outside, Delhi breathed unevenly. Smoke lingered where it should not. A smell of gunpowder threaded itself through the lanes, mixing with damp earth and something older, something that would not name itself. He sat near the window because light had become precious. The sun entered the room cautiously, as if it did not trust what it might find. Across the lane, a wall leaned with the fatigue of having been struck and spared. A crow perched on its edge and watched the street, head tilting, patient in a way men were no longer allowed to be…
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This story is a part of the book “Lives Between the Dates“, my first printed collection of short stories, bringing together twenty well thought moments from twenty well known lives across twenty Indian cities. These stories do not revisit achievement. They enter the quieter hours around it. The hesitation before action. The doubt behind conviction.
Rooted in real places and shaped by history, this collection gathers the unrecorded moments that define a life more truthfully than any monument.
If you have found something here that stayed with you, some of my other books are now available in print and digital editions. They gather longer journeys, quieter questions, and stories that continue beyond this page.
Weekend Stories by Trishikh 
Marking this one for later
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Thank you MM. It is just the snippet of the actual story. One of the 20 stories in my latest book, lives between Dates.
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Haven’t had time to sit down and read yet but keeping this marked
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Dear MM, do read when you get the time. This is just a snippet, the first paragraph of the full short story. The story is available as a collection of 20 short stories on Kindle and Paperback. I have already posted about 4 stories in this collection, will promote 16 more in the coming 16 days. And then I will continue writing free stories as susual, publishing them on Friday’s.
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It took me a little while to realize this man was writing while cannons were roaring. You wrote it so beautifully that I had to re-read it again lol. How ironic that I felt relaxed while reading about an utterly chaotic event. But you have that gift my friend.
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Dear MM, I am smiling at the thought of you discovering the cannons only on the second reading.
That contrast was intentional. I wanted the roar to remain just beyond the window, like a distant storm that refuses to enter the room. Sometimes chaos is loudest outside, while inside a man wrestles quietly with ink, memory, and hesitation. The tension between the two felt more honest than describing the noise outright.
Your reaction tells me the balance held. If you felt relaxed even as history thundered in the background, then perhaps the stillness of that moment found its rhythm.
Thank you for reading so closely that you circled back. The best compliments are the ones that say, I went back and stayed a little longer.
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Haha yes your balance was perfect. It had me fooled for a moment there. But then once I read that part I went back and read from the beginning to make sure. And it was then when I comprehended the great historical significance of what was happening. But yes you had me fooled lol.
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What a beautifully atmospheric and evocative piece this is. The Letter That Stayed Unsent draws the reader in with such quiet intensity that it feels less like reading and more like stepping softly into another time. Your portrayal of Mirza Ghalib is especially striking—intimate, human, and hauntingly reflective. Rather than presenting him as a distant literary icon, you allow us to sit beside him, to hear the silence between sounds, and to feel the weight of a world shifting beyond the window.
The imagery is exquisite: the hesitant sunlight, the bruised paper, the patient crow—all of it creates a mood that lingers long after the paragraph ends.
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Vermaji, your words arrived like a letter that did not stay unsent.
Thank you for reading with such attentiveness and grace. When someone says the story feels like stepping softly into another time, a writer feels understood in the most intimate way. That quiet intensity you speak of was deliberate. I did not want to approach Mirza Ghalib as a monument cast in bronze. I wanted to sit beside him in the half light, where genius and doubt share the same breath.
Ghalib has always fascinated me not only for his mastery of language, but for his vulnerability in the face of change. An empire fading, a city wounded, a man listening to the silence between sounds. If you could feel that shifting world beyond the window, then the room opened as it was meant to.
Your noticing of the hesitant sunlight, the bruised paper, the patient crow tells me you did not merely pass through the paragraph. You paused. And that pause is where stories truly live.
I am grateful, as always, that you walk these corridors of memory with me.
I am sure that if you get a chance to read the full story, you would enjoy it thoroughly.
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🙏👍
Aum Shanti
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Thank you so much.
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Wow
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Thank you.
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Este bello fragmento constituye una atractiva presentación que despierta interés.
Enhorabuena y gracias por compartirlo.
Un abrazo.
Daniel A.M.
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Dear Daniel, glad that you liked the opening paragraph of my short story. This is part of a collection of 20 short stories available on Kindle and Paperback. If you ever get a chance to get a copy of the book, I am sure that you would love this story as well as the others too.
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Muchas gracias, Trishikh.
Un abrazo.
Daniel A.M.
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What moved me here is not only the wounded city, but the restraint of the unwritten words. The letter that remains unsent feels less like absence and more like a deliberate pause in a time when language itself was fragile.
You allow Ghalib to sit in that hesitation, where ink spreads like a bruise and even sunlight enters cautiously. It suggests that sometimes the truest witness to history is not the proclamation, but the sentence withheld. In a world collapsing outwardly, the interior act of holding back can carry its own quiet gravity.
Thank you for honoring that fragile threshold between speech and silence.
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Dear Livora, your reading moves with the same care as the ink that refused to settle on that page.
Thank you for recognising that the unsent letter was never emptiness. It was weight. In moments when a city is wounded and language feels unreliable, silence can become the most honest companion. I wanted Ghalib to inhabit that hesitation, not as weakness, but as witness.
The spreading ink, the cautious sunlight, the pause before a sentence completes itself were all attempts to honour that fragile threshold you speak of. Sometimes what history remembers are the declarations. But what shapes a life may be the words held back, the breath taken and not released.
Your understanding of that interior gravity tells me the story found its listener. I am grateful that you stand at that quiet edge between speech and silence and choose to remain there long enough to feel its depth.
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Great description which kindles interest in the book. Well done.
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Thank you. Descriptions are so important for me. I want to be ultimately known as someone who paints with his words.
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